All Comments on 'Writer's Block Ch. 05'

Glad to see this one continue! Like seeing an old friend again. Sim's father really seems to lack any redeeming character traits, I really hope he will get what he deserves this time. I like what is happening to Imogen, I suspect we will see her grow more as this one goes. Thanks for another good one!

What a long wait but it was worth it. Another fantastic chapter. I can't help you with your editing needs - I can barely spell myself.

I love the slow development of both Sim and our heroine. The juxtaposition of her writing erotic literature yet only having one painful and unsatisfying sexual encounter is great.

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I don't know what to think about Sim's father, but he sounds like a terrible philanderer who behaved very badly toward his wife during her illness. I can certainly understand Sim's feelings toward him. <br><br>

I look forward to how this story unfolds, and to lessons 4 and 5!

Thanks for #5. Your Muse continues to seduce my mind, and you have me writing a half- dozen options for possibilities of the next chapter. Keep up the excellent work!!!

can't wait for the next chapter.i waited so long for this story to continue and i loved every minute of this chapter.now all you have to do is finish "not my type" and i'm a happy camper

Glad you are back to writing again. This chapter was well worth the wait. Thanks for a great read!

Keep up the great work! I love the stories!

What more can a reader want?

But now I really hate him! Glad to see you working on this piece-keep up the great work!

I need to know what happens next!!!

thank you thank you for the wonderful update

and update more soon!!!

I'M SO GLAD THAT YOU HAVE GONE ON WITH THIS STORY AFTER SUCH A LONG TIME!!!! I LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES AND YOUR DEFINITELY ONE OF MY FAVOURITES!

IF YOU WANT TO MAKE ME (AND I AM SURE EVERYBODY ELSE, TOO) YOU ONLY HAVE TO FINISH "NOT MY TYPE"...

You're the best writer on literotica. Post, already!

This story of yours is great - as always!!!! Please don't make us wait any longer....

pleeeeease go on writing firstkiss!!

whats going to happen next?

your stories are most definitely one of the best i've read here! and i've read quite some^^

This one is my favorite it has to be, no question about it. I hope you get an editor soon, don't think i can wait too long before reading the next chapter. Brilliant work.

I just read through all the chapters and WOW ... this is SUCH a great story. SOOO amazingly HOT. *fans herself* Good stuff, I CANNOT wait for the next chapter! Soon I hope...pleeease?

The teacher/novice aspect of this story is incredibly sexy.

Can't wait to read more - loved it.

i hope you're able to find an editor to your liking soon, because i can hardly wait for you to continue with all of your stories.

I cannot wait until you give us another part of this story! I love Sim and Imogen and the way you've got them so entwined! The facets of this story are great. PLEASE-give us more!

I hope you find an editor soon, because I'm going crazy waiting for you to continue this story! You're a talented writer, so I'm sure you'll find a good editor soon. I love these characters; please don't make us wait too long for the next installment! :-)

We're waiting!!!!

Please please PLEASE update this one soon! This is one of my favorites from you, so I'm dying to know what's next for Sim and Imogen!

I love reading your stories. Please add the next chapter soon.

dude you're killing me here. i keep checking back hoping that another chapter has been posted, and i'll get just a sliver of something more. even if it's half a page i would be over the moon. i love this story. you've got to love it too- it's too tantalizing a plot to not finish.

not only with the story but the characters themselves!!

please please please write another chapter! you're killing me [and a lot of other people it seems].

you're killing me here! I can't wait for the next chapter. and i must also say that i immensely appreciate that we seem to have the same taste in men. the guys in your stories drive me crazy! your stories always give me butterflies... feels like falling in love all over again.

I've just read all 5 chapter's of this story and I am blown away! You're a great writer, and this story is absolutely amazing! I can't wait to read the next chapter of this story - I hope you'll submit it soon!

Wow I love your writing! It's so tastefully done. But please, when are you coming out with CH 6? Unless you're done with this? Because it's been a whole year already! :)

This is my favorite story on the site so far. I adore it, and Sim, and Imogene. Your men are like the perfect fantasy. And you've left us hanging for so long! If all that's holding you back is the lack of an editor, I will gladly volunteer. Honestly!

I'm so glad to see that you are back, I had to re-read this one and I was reminded by how much I'm still dying for the next chapter. Please PLEASE finish this one, I think it's your best story yet. Your characters are fantastic, and you can feel the tension between Sim and his father. Please please keep this one going, it's too good to not. Thanks!

It's great to see you back writing and posting again! I'm enjoying reading about Joe and Rhiannon's story currently, even if it's not Writer's Block, it's just read to read your stuff. I'm secretly hoping there's still more to come for this pair though, the build up has been so hot, lol! Hopefully there's a chapter 6 buried someplace? I'm sure a lot of your readers look forward to seeing more for Sim and Im. Good luck and thanks for the wonderful tales :)

I love your stories, i'm extasic you're back !!

And i love the new not my type story, i'm just hopin' that you somehow want to continue this story too . . .

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this is so amazing and the story is just trully getting started... please continue

This is honestly one of the best stories I've ever read on this site. I'm dying here. I seriously need more chapters. (yes, that's a plural)

I'm dying here... Nuf said.

When will there be more??

Please make Jude fall in love with Imogen. That'll be fun!

I can't wait until you do the next chapter!! I hope it is soon!!!

please update this story!!! Why haven't you updated this for more than a year. Please don't just end it like this!

This story is amazing! You are a truely talented writer. This is my fave out of all your stories and I really hope you write some more. Keep up the excellent work!

This story was posted a while ago, I hope u had found your editor..new to your stories and my English is not perfect so..^^ cheers!!

I laid my head on the table and tried to breathe deeply to

Only if the head was severed from the body; other wise it's "I lay my head on the table..." But Lay, laid, lie, etc are so damn confusing, even for veteran writers!

Of course. They get caught. And interrupted. Again. Glad you gave them time to get decent. LOL

Usually I find the words that are wrong and the him and her errors(she kissed her wonderful breasts-this wasn't a leszbian story)