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Bi47Bi47about 4 years ago
ExcellentπŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

I love Sci-fi Tentacles and women. Can do one male sex. Love your ImaginationπŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Needs a lot of work

This story went nowhere. What plot does it advance? What does it inform us? How are the characters relatable in any way? What are the ramifications of what is happening? There is only so much room inside a human body for fluids. You give no sense of time scale either. As it's written, this story is incredibly lazy.

2soon2no2soon2noover 2 years ago

Good writing. Certainly not complete, but not meant to be either. Not the world I like to dream of, but hey, it's a world that only exists in your mind.

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Many of my older stories have been sold. But if you email me (with your email address) I am happy to share any of your favorites for free. My wife and I are both bisexual, polyamorous, and ridiculously kinky which is reflected in my work. If you are interested in lifestyle/lg...