All Comments on 'You Can’t Stop Me Ch. 04'

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Anonymousalmost 12 years ago

Love this

Carman is one screwed up lass!

be good to learn more of her issues and see Ash & lindsay help her get over them.

Like the others I thought she was a ghost but I think it's more to do with her past (ie the hint of her burglar skills that lets her into the house).

MORE..... MORE ..... MORE!!!!

Sidney43 almost 12 years ago

Good chapter. Yes, Carmen is a bit screwed up in the head and as commented already it is because of her past. For some reason she has fixated on Robert as her white knight, her savior and I am sure the explanation will be interesting. Keep posting.

tazz317 over 11 years ago

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bruce22 over 11 years ago

Really enjoying this

It is so slow it is almost painful like a good bit of sex play.

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