All Comments on 'You Know I Can See You, Right? Ch. 07'

The next chapter must be added soon!

I've lost patience with this drawn out story!

love the stroy keep it going

I found these two chapters length and story told in them , were the best two chapters so far, I too was getting tired of the drawn out story. But these two were most excellent.I look forward to reading of their first time experience together and the 3 getting together and being a committed family all three for , but I think I remember something about him having a sister maybe, I dont remember that was so long ago since that was written. Please, I hope your time allows your be able to complete the story with a little less time between chapters. thanks for continuing. disabled h and and so many pain meds is hard to type , so this is rare for me to leave a comment more than a few words, forgive the grammar, Im just trying to simply get this out / bill

Not too drawn out for me, as a great buildup.

Is great to read a well presented work of art

If it is too long WAIT till the last chapter and read that.

In the mean time stop complaining about a well writen entertaining story

Find a quick pull story elswhere and stop hassleing a gifted storyteller.

Thank you

What a nice read. The author keeps us on the edge with it. My first first thought was to open the comment with "Are you nuts to leave it here???", but thought better - so pretty please, write some more. And it's perfect so far, very good story. Nice to read about the beautiful vicinity too, btw.

While there are so many writers here that either miss the boat when it comes to writing erotica or make sex seem dull and repetitive... you do not. I skim most stories and read yours--word for word.

You're a very gifted writer and this is a fantastic story. Don't be put off by the comments about "this drags out" or "you take too long to get to the point", it's your story, built it at your pace. I really enjoy the romance & love you're developing between all three. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Thanks for the wonderful comments. I am so busy, but love to write, I promise to continue the next chapter soon. Any thoughts for similar, (or not), stories that I can tackle? I am wildly pleased that you all are enjoying it; I enjoy writing it.

Came to your site from you being listed with another writer, so glad I did. Had to read all chapters in one go, not something I normally do. Will wait impatiently for the next chapter.

This is such a wonderful series I don't know how anyone can give it less than 5 stars!!

Perfect everything!!

It was going so well until the slut talk and domination.

The story had a nice flow and the back and forth of changing feelings and then it turned into some kind of skull fuck. I am too old I guess not to have some thought that they would be joined in love and then later a bit more energy in their sex. I was of the impression he loved her.

This chapter was the perfect description of love, as opposed to sex. between a man and a woman.