All Comments on 'You Motherfucker Ch. 01'

More parents should give into their natural desires instead of social norms.

too short

I like the way the story is progressing, and look forward to Nora and Jonathan's life together.

Keep up the good work and I look forward to the continuing relationship.

Had me hard and stroking from the beginning

I loved reading your story. And I am looking forward to the next parts .... maybe a bit longer? .... ;-)

I love mom & son incest stories and this has the beginning of a wonderful cum filled story. I cannot wait until this young boy gets to put his cock inside his mommy and fucks her and then cums in her pussy. Cannot wait!

I love family cuck stories. Try not to keep us waiting for an update.

no vote.

Good start. Looking forward the reading the next installment.

First installment entirely too short, really more like an introduction. You could have a blockbuster going here, but it might also be a dud, so I'll wait to score it. Good Luck!

There's no better pussy than a hot and hairy mommy pussy to both eat and fill with a big, hard cock. Especially if your her horny son so Dad can watch them getting their incestual rocks off with one another. Please do hurry with the next chapter of this hot Mom, Dad and Son story. Then you can work on Dad getting some of his Daughters tight little pussy too.

Don’t post unti you have a story. Some good things going on. Good potential, but that’s all it is: potential. Chapter one should always be a complete story unless chapter two is posted simultaneously. Subsequent chapters can add to the story but should not be necessary to complete it. This build up and leave you hanging thing is overused, frustrating, and just reeks of begging to be followed. If your writing is good, and yours does show potential, you can write a chapter that includes closure but foretells more to come and readers will still look forward to more. Readers who may not catch your conclusion may learn to avoid you as the half- story man that they don’t have time to deal with.

Nice start but incomplete. Also never knew a guy could splurge into a pussy.

you had me from the get go =hard and one hand'd type-ing then left me hanging .part 2 soon please

Finish what you started,its nowhere.

What the heck, you just leave us hanging like that.........

This story needs to continue. More character and plot/subplot development. This was a good start.

NEEDS AN ENDING !

No incest in this story. Should be in the Loving Wife category . . . .

Hope he still likes his wife as her belly starts to grow!