All Comments on 'You Ought to be in Pictures'

I found this so hot! But everything this author writes always gets me hard. I become erect very quickly when reading these stories. I am addicted to masturbation and enjoy some wonderful orgasms. I love to read about young men in panties.

I positively love this story. Billie is so innocent, of sex, of her sexuality, and her discovery of both and her affection for Frank left me tingling with anticipation for more parts to this story.

Sure, hope there is another chapter coming soon, where Belle gets her breasts... Hugs and Kisses Betty jo xoxo

nice story Billie (or Belle) is very lucky!!!!

What a great start, keep going!

Great story - Loved it. With you all the way.

Loved the build up . Please introduce us to Belle xx

God, I loved this story, so erotic. How I wish I were Biilie/Belle. Xxx

love the story would like to see it evolve further

Well Written. 5 stars! Write part 2.

Awesome story ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️🤩

very well done, best male seduction i read for a long time, yes i need part two and three also.

Unexpected and lovely

As a princess, I was enthralled throughout. Great job!

Lovely.