All Comments on 'You Owe Me'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
needs work

it's good........i must give u that, but they're the only 2 persons in the story.....you don't need to use their names so much. kinda downplays the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Hot stuff

Very hot. Loved the chemistry between the two characters. One of your best.

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