All Comments on 'You POS; I Have a Daughter?! Ch. 01'

This story wasn't as bad as I thought it would be. Only thing that bothered me was he has no concern that his daughter was probably used by her mom's boyfriends or pimped out by the mom. Especially if she is a little slow like the mom said shame to have taken advantage of her & now he's doing the same thing.

Is his daughter on the spectrum or what? I kind of get the image he’s sticking his dick in his sexually abused, mentally deficient daughter without a second thought

You need to continue the story. Is that all that happened? I doubt it.

The stories here are supposed to be fiction, but I have a hunch stories like this are probably all too common.

I call the local news "Trash behaving badly... "

So he just meets his daughter, and lets her suck his dick.......... 3 stars only...........

Masterfully crafted for the truly uninhibited reader.

Thanks for the feedback. I'll address a few things here: First, this will continue. If it says Pt. 1, it means it will be a continued story of usually 3 to 8 parts. If it says Ch. 1, it indicates something that will go on for 10 or more, so this story will have at least ten chapters to it. Also, for those of you who are familiar with my writing style, there's a pretty good chance that the story will NOT go in the direction you think it is (for instance, she's not actually stupid). This is also an odd topic, which is why it only has a 4.2 rating, while also having 50+ likes and adding 38 new followers in just over 24 hours. People either love incest or hate it.

a weird spot to stop.

The premise is fairly good but the dialogue is totally unrealistic, even for porno fiction.

As others said - great story. It is an interesting concept. I can't wait to read the next part! Please continue. 5 stars!

I would think most people reading your story know & like reading incest stories. I think the problem with this story is your portrayed Katie as being slow. There is a difference between someone who is slow & someone who is stupid. We all know the dumb blonde jokes. If you say she is slow most people will think she’s mentally challenged not stupid. Maybe you should of worded that better if that was your point to make. I don’t think people didn’t like the incest part of this story it was you portrayed her as slow & most people aren’t going to enjoy reading about a mentally challenged person being sexually abused! Just a thought for you to consider. Be careful what you write!

Like the story . It does need another chapter though. AAA++++

Really looking forward to more of this story . Loved it.