All Comments on 'Young Asian Girl Seeks Domination'

Wow.I would have started to curse in Spanish because of the baby part but very interesting and well written story 14Kink.

Doubt it highly, unless both of them are total nut jobs not worried about catching STDs, or ending up dead in a ditch somewhere.

By the end of the story, I really didn't give a sh**. The story was not well written and didn't take the reader "inside" the scene.

Personally I have good reason to think it's true.

Yep. Disturbing, but the veracity of it is immaterial.

~ Bluestargrrrl

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I liked it. The truth or non-truth of it is totally immaterial. Since when are we all CSI: Fuckville? We read shit to get us stimulated and turned on and that's it. This was stimulating, you can't deny it, so stop whining like prepubescent pussies. It's literotica, not up for the Hugo Award. Have some perspective. Nice job brother.

I didn't say it wasn't stimulating ;)

~ Bluestargrrrl

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Like next time, order her to bring Yenni with her and teach the girls the fine arts of pleasing their master while pleasing each other.

I am writing the sequel, but cannot get the friends involved, this is a true story, so it is not perfect, but real life..

I'm an avid fan of literotica, as you would well know.

And being immortalized like that in a story.. Well, a girl can't complain.

-withoutomission a.k.a June-

Very hot, indeed.

The guy acts like such an asshole it largely ruins the fun.

Very nice. I enjoyed reading about your antics. Looking forward to reading the next instalment or something new that may have caught your attention. PureDelight.

Not a real story

I was wondering if you might like to bring her friend Yenny into the story - could be very interesting............

I would like to see more with there further time spent together

this isn't domination, it is brutalization