All Comments on 'Young Guy Goes To College Ch. 05'

hope to read more of it so far it has been a good story

Please keep going.. It is a hot story and we need to know what happens to Jackie..

keep the story going I love to find out what happens over then next 7 days of spring break does Jackie get to go back to a rainbow frat party or does she meet up with Brian durign the week

I really want more! I keep reading it over and over again... way better than any fantasy I ever came up with on my own.

Hey man good job so far, please continue the story,

I liked this story until you had to go gay on it... I wish you would have just stuck to girl on crossdresser, not all crossdresser like males, it was nice to read a story that didnt go down this path but sadly it did:( Aside from the cock fest at the end good story;)

... please continue!

I love it,I love the story, I love the series,I love the characters, I wish it could be made into an anmi, or a video series. Please write more, I cant wate for the next one.

Incredible story and I hope to see it continued. Straight, gay or bi makes difference as your story is so close to a fantasy I've had for a few years now. I've let a little of it happen but not as much as in your fantastic, well written story. If you do add more to the story, please keep WS out of it.

First time I've ever commented, love this series. You've got to keep writing. How about a 3 way with Brian, Jackie and Julie!

This is one of the better series on this site. Keep it going!

this is the best story on the site, and i would be disappointed if it isn't finished.

i loved this story you should really write the next part of it

Please come back and continue this story!!!! I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope that Brian finds out the truth and can accept Jackie for what she is!!!! This story has been so hot!!! For a submissive man, this story has been great from all angles!!!!

Please come back and write more!!!!

Plz continue the story!!

i've been waiting for a continuation for too long...

best stories on here!

Love the story so far, but don't leave us hanging!

dont stop writing this story, your very talented. i enjoy them very much

Don't stop writing, I love it!

I have read all of your stories and am looking forward to the rest of the story. I am very interested in finding out about the rest of Jackie's adventures.

this was so good don't stop writing you are so good at it

One of the best stories. Don't stop. Your little slut is giving me tons of ideas.

This is a great story I really love everything you've been having Jackie do. I love reading about him taking it up the ass from Julie but I'd really like it if you added guys to the equation and had Jackie get fucked by multiple men. Please finish the story, I have to know how big of a cum slut Jackie becomes

Please finish, great read. Would love to see what happens next

please write more..... you know you want to

I am loving this series and can't wait for more. My boyclit is soo hard in my panties ...

I really like this story just found it and have read all 5 and am looking forward to the next one. So will he stay a girl for collage or not?

hi i love this story i wanna be this guy, i really hope there is another chapter

All 5 parts were great i wish itwas me please keep writing!!!!!!!!

I can't wait to read what is going to happen next to Jackie. Please continue

I love this series! Please continue it!

Seriously. This is amazing. You need to continue the story.

Great writing, and it's nice to see how you've clearly been planning ahead when writing each chapter (most obviously here with the girls' punishment and Brian).

Great twist with the rainbow party (and so tantalizingly set up). I would love it if you went into more detail with the cock-sucking, and Jackie's reaction to it, having to suck off so many huge cocks for the first time. Seemed a little lacklustre, to be honest. Otherwise, amazing series!! Definitely the best one on this site!! Finish it, please!!

Could you please continue as its very interesting esp as I was a transgirl same age as you, cant stop fingering my pussy when Im reading your stories

Your a really good story teller i would love to see more of this story when you get around to it souch potential

Love your story babe.

;)

I'm a really big fan of Centrum1000 and I found you through them. I really enjoy the stories, you should keep them going! Please and thank you for the consideration

-a fan

Need to keep story going. I'm in love with Jackie and the girls

Loved the whole story, Id like to be in Jackie shoes hope she is wearing heels

Oh, pleeeeease continue writing.

Your stories got me craving cock in my ass and cum on my face sooooo much.

Mistress forces me read storys on literotica and masturbate without squirting my jizz all over me and reading your stories is such a sweet torture.

I just finished reading all 5 chapters and I am really liking this story. I hope you continue.

I really enjoyed reading all of the chapters. I think there is more to tell, and a lot of different paths the story could go. I hope you continue the story. I will add you to my list and be watching for the next chapter. Great job!

Really want to know what happens next

More please

It’s great I’d love to read more