by Otazel
Not to imply this wasn't well written--it was so well-done I didn't even notice, where if there are miss-spellings, poor word-usage, or other grammatical errors I notice immediately --but the main thing about this was that it was so hot and horney. The only way it could have gotten hotter would be to have had more girl-girl action, which sounds like it could be coming [cumming?] next time, or more oral stuff, like Mark getting one girl off, then the other pulling him out and sucking him off [and then sharing his cum with the one that was cheated out of it before, to make it really hot]. But this was right up there with the hottest of the stories on this site. [Now please don't screw it up by bringing in anal. A little of the fingering isn't too bad, but no genital-anal or oral-anal activities.
Can't wait for the next instalment of Mark fucking Amey fucking Donna.
Please we need chapter 3!!!
Seriously, this is one of the best stories I have read on literotica
Please continue!