by Otazel
Excellent ! - Especially Amy's Finger !!!!!!!!
Sequel please !
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Great stuff well written the build up intense and the ending sizzled. Well done!
One of the best stories ever written here. Would love to read more.
This read like some loving encounters I've had of my own - flows very well. Thanks!
Well written and very hot - make my cock aching. Thanks!
I like stories where the gal shows off/gives her man to her friend(s). This one is very well written and, shows feelings and dialog.
Minor point: glossed over two hard issues. Why is he divorced? I know it does not figure in the story. But a line or few about it would help my curiosity. A harder issue is how in the world does a 43 year old land a 19 year old? Such a hard question, but it is not dealt with. He already has her before the story begins, leaving me hung up on it as I kept reading.
Paul in Oklahoma
5 Stars from me also. Reminds me of my mates sister. I'd fucked her a few times, when one day she turned up at my parents house (They were out), with her best friend. She told me her friend was a virgin, and she had promised her friend she could have me become her first. I was actually very reluctant. I was young and full of pure ideas of what sex should be like. Wow if it happened today, I'd feel like I had won Lotto. I must write that story up sometime.