All Comments on 'Your Mother Saw My Pussy Pt. 01'

Great start. Fucking hilarious. Can’t wait to find out what happens next.

I can't wait for tomorrow! What a way to start the new year. So much promise -- it might be hard to live up to it. I have faith in you, however. Happy New Year, Yellowjacket! 5*~~JB

You write good "short" stories ... ask me how i know ... good "short" stories are hard to write.

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and ... suggest finding a good 'beta' reader. ... there are a couple ( or more ) wrong words that neither your nor spell check caught .

... keep up the good work !

Tail_Gunner AKA Levi Coldwater

You have a way of story telling that keeps you interested in what comes next. Luv several of your stories. Cant wait for the the next chapter!

what a solid 5 this is. I can't wait to see what all happens.

More please!

Oh god thats hot see soon both couples have foursomen & swap their wifes please describe couples features like cock & tits size. I bet jimmy would love to suck cindy big tits of 34E size

Nice hot start. I hope you will continue and all the fantasy will become reality.

Please continue, great so far.....