All Comments on 'You're My Wife Now Pt. 04'

The story feels rushed and that the writer took it out on the hero of the story. Too bad. Permanent large breasts overnight? Not quite. Keep up writing, though.

More!!!!!!!

Not quite overnight.

"When I awoke I had breasts. They were bandaged and sore. The doctor leaned over and told me how often I had to change my dressings and that I had to wear a sports bra for 2 months. "

"The next few weeks were a blur to me." The last part took place weeks after the breast implants.

I got a lot of stick for this story on other sites about how horrible Frankie was. Hardly a hero to most people.

TBH it was a little rushed. I wanted a way to finish it. I think as I would love to be female. Forcing someone, really forcing them, seems alien to me. That's why so many of my characters end up liking it. Who wouldn't LOL

Ah, a nice strong finish. Hopefully, Tami will get to relax and enjoy her new body after her crazy ordeal with Frankie. We can only hope...

I loved the finish...Thank you Hugs and Kisses Betty jo xoxo

Thank you Betty Jo and Sabrina x.

I have sort of parked Seven years, but still have a few more to write.