by Grouchojim
Somewhat reminds me of the movie with Nick Nolte, Down & Out in Beverly Hills. I'm not sure why but it did and then it got much better, LOL. A lot of expansion to certain male fantasy in some spots that made it more fun to read and it never really lagged for me.
Keep 'em coming!
BRAVO!!
A well written spoof. Loved it. Nice and light. Funny as hell. All the 0ld worn out cliches possible. But as entertaining as a kitten chasing a laser pointer.