All Comments on 'You're The One Ch. 01'

Warm and homey and sexy. A great combination.

It was a great story. Great characters and story but "sweat dreams"??

I can't wait for chapter 2!!

That's was a beautifully written love story.

Thanks

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Keep tis story going you are a very good writer. Thank you

This story came out great! I have the biggest crush on one my college professors and reading this just blew me away. Vv appreciated ;)

I have a teacher whom I am having a similar situation with and this story blew me away. Please continue it

now that was nice but the next one you sure have the other teacher to join in with them two she may love it to

Thanks to everyone for the amazing comments. I'm happy that you all enjoy this story. The second chapter is pending approval. I would like to apologise for the typo on page one. It's supposed to be 'sweet dreams' not 'sweat dreams'. I missed that one when I read through it before posting.

Love and peace

Such a wonderful beginning of this love story!

Thank you for sharing it with us!

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I'd like to simply thank you for sharing this story with us. After I finish reading, it starts growing on me and I want to read the next chapter. So, thanks.

An old fashion "lesbian" love story. Who knew, but one could only hope. This is so dreamy like fairy tales and love everlasting

I liked how they lost their virginity at the same time. I wish you had elaborated a lot more on that part with more descriptions. Take your time.

Such a tender love story. Thank you so much.

True love. Very sweet.

Very much so! thank you for sharing it with us!

Thanks for a beautiful story.