All Comments on 'You've Got to Pay the Price'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Meh.

Interesting premise, but the use of nothing but odd slang to describe everything weakened the story.

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Hi. I'm just your typical boy here. I like to write happy stories about guys getting off. But usually I end up including things like demons, ghosts, robots, spells, or curses anyway. Feel free to message me if you have any comments, questions, story ideas, etc. I might n...