All Comments on 'Zoe - Training a Submissive'

Very well written, I enjoyed every word. Can't wait to see more from you!!

love it. great story. really hot.

I generally like the story, it’s very hot, but I have a problem with some aspects of how things progressed between them:

1) they did not discuss terms of what they both expect out of this. He’s supposedly experienced, he should have discussed limits with her

2) the first time he saw her naked was when he ordered her to undress in front of his friends? What abt building trust? And motioning her to get on with it? Doesn’t seem respectful. At least share this intimate moments alone before adding more people to the mix

3) he let his friend order her ard? And touch her without asking his permission? She’s not common propert, she’s his, and he’s not respecting her

I loooove this story. So hot. I lived in Columbus for a while and I picture cole living in that fancy huge house on the corner of Buttles and Dennison. Made the story come to life :)

The story is prompting all the right feelings but there are definitely bits missing and that leaves the story disjointed.

If you don’t want to write the actual scenes where they discuss their limits, safe words etc then try including it a synopsis at the start of the story. One author that I’ve read a lot of on here has a disclaimer of sorts at the start of each story, stating basic assumptions like STDs don’t exist in the world that he’s writing about.

Even so Cole’s initial interactions with here at his house did come across as being off.

Enjoying the story so far tho’

Tess (UK)

Extraordinary story! Incredibly arousing, well-written.

Wonderful story. I read this and the sequel and loved them both. Do you have more sub training stories? I wish there were a sequel to the sequel.