Hearts on Fire

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rgjohn
rgjohn
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"Too bad," Sam smiled. A second later her fingers were playing with Sally's swollen sex lips. "I guess you expected this," she said with a smile at the fact that she had left her panties off.

"You know that I never wear panties around you. Besides, I seemed to have lost a pair of my panties."

Sam's face turned red when she remembered what she had done with the young girl's panties. However Sally never saw her embarrassment as her head dropped quickly between her thighs.

"Ohhhhh Sammmmm!!!" Sally screamed. It took only a few seconds for Sally to begin to tremble in climax. She locked her thighs around Sam's head, almost drowning her with her juice as a tremendous climax overtook her.

Sam stopped her car on the dark parking lot of the pub. She turned the engine off and turned to her lover. Then, she reached her hand out and brushed a lock of hair from her pretty face. She touched her warm cheek with her hand. "This is so crazy, but I love you," she stated.

Sally took Sam's hand and kissed the palm. "Oh God, I love you too. So much it hurts." Tears began to stream down her cheeks. "Is this it then?" she asked dreading the answer.

Sam didn't answer right away. She stared at Sally with a serious look. "Larry and I have a time-share down in the Florida Keys. I was thinking of going down there sometime during Christmas break to go sailing. Do you think you think you could sneak away and join me?" A smile came to her lips.

Sally looked at Sam like she didn't comprehend what she had said. Then her eyes grew wide. "Oh my God! Are you serious?" she screamed.

"Yes!"

"What about your husband, your family, your reputation?"

"We'll just have to be very careful."

"Thank you!" Sally said and almost fell into the older woman's arms.

"Uh... Sally, not out here," Sam said looking around the dark parking lot.

"Oh sorry," she said and pulled away. "But how can I possibly wait that long to be with you?" Sally asked with concern.

"Well, we do have to work on our essay, 'Lesbianism in Modern Literature,'" Sam answered with a wide smile. "And, if we are going to write about something like that, we will have to do a lot of research. Won't we?"

Sally wanted to squeal with joy. Instead she said, "Of course. What kind of a piece of work would it be without in-depth research? At least that's what a great English professor once told me."

"I'll see you tomorrow in class," Sam said.

Sally got out of the car and turned back and looked inside. "I love you," she mouthed before she turned and ran to her car.

Sam sighed and started the car. She knew that she should feel guilty about what she was doing but somehow she just didn't. And, although she knew this was incredibly dangerous, for the first time in her life she felt free and madly in love.

The End

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Ravey19Ravey1912 months ago

What a wild, mas and passionate love story.

UncertainTUncertainTover 1 year ago

Truely great writing.

WoodencavWoodencavover 1 year ago

I don’t normally read Lesbian stories, however knowing what a great writer you are, I thought I would give it a go. What a fantastic love storey, enjoyed it very much. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

okami1061okami1061almost 2 years ago

I thought for sure that a male writing a story about two women snowed in in a cabin in the woods would be tritely sexual—a male wet dream (emphasis on 'dream').

I was definitely wrong. Even female readers love this story.

Multiple people commented on the ambiguity of pronoun antecedents (what noun a pronoun is actually referred to). This is fairly common in same-gender exchanges written in 3rd person. It takes considerable skill to do this naturally without throwing in lots of people's names to disambiguate pronouns, which is usually quite unnatural (people just don't talk that way; speakers frequently leave pronouns ambiguous, even if they have to explain it afterwards). But it can be done, usually with thoughtful and careful sentence construction and the two rules of antecedents: 1) the antecedent is the closest noun before the pronoun and 2) unless that doesn't work because the sentence makes no sense using rule number 1, in which case look further back for the antecedent noun. I found that I did have reread a few sentences packed with female pronouns. The thing is, after doing that, I actually found no errors. Every sentence made complete sense upon 2nd or 3rd reading. That's quite a little accomplishment there.

Really really good writing is sometimes hard to read in one pass (e.g., anything by William Shakespeare). A really good reader learns to automatically analyze and reread sentences without letting it "throw them out of the story" (something NO writer wants).

kaleonanikaleonaniover 2 years ago

Wow!!! what an awesome love story, unbelievable how two women can climax so much and not go into a coma. What an incredible imagination in creating such an immense love story between two women mesmerized with passion for each other. I would cheer these two women Sam and Sally on to further endeavors in their relationship to grow even stronger. Thank You for such an awesome ability to put this experience for us to enjoy.

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