All Comments on 'A pace or two ahead.'

This is pretty damn well written. My only comment would be to ditch the semi colon on the fourth line and that occassional capitalisation at the head of the line or go completely capitalised; this midway thing calls attention to itself. You're getting a reccomendation.

I always sense something when I read a work I've not read before. Within my own mind, I conjur memories of places and things that happened so long ago I've all but forgotten them. Personally, I absolutely love your poem.

Your poems always stretch my imagination, and I read them more than once. This is no different.

I think you missed an opportunity for a more powerful image than "types" in L9, e.g., "halved" or "cleaved," given what follows in L10.