All Comments on 'Attention Slip'

some wonderful wordplay and alliteration made this exciting to read, and the suspense of the velvet, suspended seemingly in air, to titilate a moment before falling was inspired. You have portrayed her mastery over you with your master wordplay. Well done.

jim : )

Glad you didn't let it languish on the threads. I know I'm a whore for alliteration, but DAYUM I love this poem.

a sensuous slide the whole way...beautiful Liar, thank you.