All Comments on 'Between Thoughts'

This is very interesting because the language is aesthetic and thoughtful, not jarring and crushing as in many of your other poems and yet in some ways it's a more powerful piece to me. I feel that you're writing about something I understand: the peaceful empty spaces between connections and what one might find there.

Great read. Thank you.

I just can't quite grasp it, I love the way it reads, I love the words you used

but the meaning is skimming out of reach, I'm not sure if that was your intent, however the skimming out of reach seems to be connected to the idea of the piece

"The chasms between thought"

it may be less jarring and much softer than normal but as always for me still impressive.