All Comments on 'Bluest Fields'

I love that. excellent poem, Imp...cant wait for more. Please, continue.

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like the "Crystalline chaos" line!! The last stanza doesn't have quite as smooth a rhythm as the others. Otherwise, very haunting and lovely!

I love the way this flows, imp; very melodic.

has done it again...

this is awesome...spiraling downward

with poetic style that impressive

is so good at...great poem,,,

deep~

on the new poems review thread.

I love the use of repeated alliteration. Fantastic poem.

The picture painted in my mind with the phrase "within bluest fields deep" is beautiful, thank you.

...this form despite a notable lack of success in my own usage. It creates the feeling that you are expanding multiple views on a single theme and is very effective here.

and simply lovely

within bluest fields deep

greener grass breathes

a fertile caress of promise

sounds like someone has been sniffing manure

Simple & complex alliteration ~ well done.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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give off the gentle blue breeze, TK U MLJ LV NV