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by tellstory2jake

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buttersbuttersover 13 years ago
this

made me smile. lots.

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 13 years ago
good meter....

......and an enjoyable, thank you tellstory (and you did).

Tess

vrosej10vrosej10over 13 years ago
Cool poem

Liked the subtle repetition. It evoked someone tired and going in the kind of mental circles you go in when you're first awake or just about to go to sleep.

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