All Comments on 'Disappointment'

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyabout 18 years ago
Wow !!!

I don't know so much about the title,

but the poem and the feel blew me away

... Touching, wrenching ... Heartbreak~

More Sack !!!

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 18 years ago
to me....

the hammer descending is very much in tune with factory. it sounds like poem is about the loss of jobs. and if i'm right, it is a disappointment......nice......don

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Next?

Through a crisis ~ coming out on the other side into brighter days ~ waiting apprehensively for the next one.

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