All Comments on 'doo-wop for a demigod'

has been mentioned in Sunday's review.

This is brilliant, really. Funny, I was at a fall festival yesterday and a (quite good) jazz funk band was playing. I say a few chickies hovering stageside, so your theme was kinda on my mind. It amazes me that you write this stuff and it's not in your first language--maybe that helps????

with Ange.

I can't write this well, this clear and compact in my own language.

This had a great feel and flow to it.

Sarcasm and envy and bitterness with a touch of humor.

Lots to chew on

Thank you

This made me smile and think that if Abstrusions were truly real, this is what would be happening, night after night ~ body shot after body shot!

Impressive. I enjoyed the delivery and the beat of your words.

i enjoyed this piece very much / it is pointed and very controlled / great work /

Just wondering... did you mean "Halcyon"?

is a tight and nasty lil old benzodiazepine, akin to xanax, valium and ativan, only much stronger. in the US, is mainly used in institutional settings as of late... did you mean halcion? :D

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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