All Comments on 'Embers'

A new arrival's first poem. I particularly like the lines

"I'd keep you in a hot house,.....

.....I'd kiss you till the peel came off."

Lots of promise, I hope we see many more works from this poet soon.

(vote but no therm.)

this is a new poet here whose first poem is full of promise/ i'm surprised there hasn't been more comment on this poem / the phrasing is excellent in spots / many of the lines are very original and jump out /

I LOVE this poem! I love hot house work anyway- I raise orchids. But I never would have thought of this imagery. I think this is beautiful! Thank you, Kerra.

Strong images and phrasing. I look forward to more of your work!

than what has been said. Good poem. Sexy without being vulgar and nicely worded.

I sure don't know why- it's beautiful! Thank you, Kerra!

My comp didn't show me the comments til after I made that last.

Meh, I suppose the best artists steal. Great images.