All Comments on 'Eternity Blinks'

Very visual, and strong! I almost felt like Satan swirling down through the universe, time all that there is once in heaven and now plummeting into the gates of hell... wow.. this was a strong well written write.. thank you

Du~

your poem is mentioned in the Sunday reviews..

You've got to love images like this: "cheap wine guilty"!

This poem nicely evokes the monotony of life moving to judgement. Well done, Sir Nathan!

This is a beautiful poem, very well written :)