All Comments on 'Fast Rage'

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todski28todski28over 10 years ago
Only issue I had

Reading this was the phrase

"So well" so close together. Nice look at one of the darker emotions, leaving a contemplative ending on a subject matter thag is individually different is IMHO a nice way to end it. I like the final two lines

AngelineAngelineover 10 years ago
Excellent writing

You conjure an all but nuclear blind rage and then add humanity at the end when you question it and maybe even welcome it. Powerful writing.

I think I agree with Tod about the "so well" only because "well" is a blah kind of word to me and something more meaningful, maybe something like "complete" would give you more there.

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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 10 years ago
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Powerful piece although I don't get this line unless it's a typo ..... 'As your feel your body respond so tight'. Agree with the 'So well' of previous comments

SubbymaybeSubbymaybeover 10 years ago
wD hello again

You of course know I understand this completely and feel my own form(s) of rage....about something or another.

miss u....and you know I luv the "or smile and enjoy it" ;)

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