by Liar
loved it; wonderful words here -
I especially enjoyed;
"in punctured palms
but that is all forgetful flesh recalls."
- nice
"cyan white as carefree as the sky."
- mmmmm, delicious!!!
and finaly a really great end -
"You said
I will never hear it,
but I leave a better story when I go."
:)
I especially liked this:
We let in
an indian summer wind,
spiralling a dust cloud in the sun.
You stepped in
and swirled along
to tell me that a new day had begun.
-Curiouswife
And you
are older now than ever,
slower now to savor every breath.
You say
There's always something bigger
but living on a linger isn't death.
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overall a very nice piece......don
of soul food...gives me the munchies...just grand Liar...smiles/blue
Many areas I enjoyed in this wistful work... thank you for the lesson
du lac`
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