All Comments on 'for a saturday sprite'

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impressiveimpressiveabout 19 years ago
This just dances ...

... off my tongue. I've loved it since I saw it on the forum. Very nice, Liar. ~Imp

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
~

absinthe

got the beast

out you

missing a word?

the blend that makes diaries burn with confusion

i am you are we were somehow a three hour exception

commas?

This would've been much better if you proof-read your work before submitting.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
it's a nice poem

I see someone has already mentioned "got the beast out you."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Excellent!

i love it, missing words and all! Fun poems today, Liar.

fly

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Good poem

Just a few minor errors that I think were over-looked. Thanks for the read.

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