All Comments on 'Ghost'

I do know the difference between "your" and "you're" I promise. Sigh.

You're, I mean your, explanation in the comment section is funny. :) I can tell you know the difference. The poem is interesting! It's a long, thin poem. Well, it appears that way, and sometimes that works. I'd like to see longer line lengths with this one, though.

I understand WickedEve's longing for longer line length, but I swear, I like it like it is... and yes, it seems to be hunting for something ELSE... a *wonderful* submission, thank you... keep them coming, please... ... / tm

at least one line would be better longer and/or shorter

/creates the cut and<

cauterizes./ General rule of thumb, unless you have an excellent reason for it, don't end a line on "and". I agree with Eve.