All Comments on 'hyperpyrexia'

BT!!!

I relate to this one moreso than your other hypersonnet, the mix of modern day issues with classical structure<with a twist> tickles me. The subject matter is something I know by heart, and so you reached deep down inside me with this one. perfect meter, faultless structure.

loved the lines, fuck, I can't pick one, I love all of them.

whatever it is with me ;)

I know how this feels LIar, really and truly, LOVE this stanza-

a struggling but domesticated brain

run high on holy endorphins and heat

while razor rape is mocking my defeat

and torture tastes like kisses and cocaine

someday, my as of yet unborn grandkids will be reading your poems in a nortons anthology, along with a bunch of other poets from here!! and that will be so cool, dont you think? :)

This too is perfect; I like the other better. Thank you, Liar!