All Comments on 'Intentions'

Love this phrase: "like violet honey" ~Imp

I like this! I agree about violet honey. Lovely words among some other very good phrases.

Does this come from, must be inside and brings itself to the surface to make us also look within.

Well done Sima. I also have to articulate that 'violet honey' just rolls off the tongue, an intriguing image, and I am glad that it is something others feel the same toward. Very soft felt poem with contrasting images, particularly the above line in opposition to fluorescent. :)

Gorgeous images: 'melting...one puddle' and 'winking under the flourescents' give it a gritty, but senuous feel. Very erotic, very HOT. Nice!

You've beautifully woven the language into something that is simultaneously real and ethereal. Amazing work.

This is a lovely poem, SIMA...it stays with you.

~Honey

Erotic and haunting at the same time. This one will be sticking with me for a while.

Nice to read and reread... and still wonder :)