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Click hereintentions flow like the rain
careless drops
acidic
your tongue
casting long glances in my direction
winking under the florescents
love looking too pale in this light
fingers stroke
sweeping my skin together
melting
one puddle
bodies burning into the touch
i love you
slips out like violet honey
my lips
press against yours
and i know that it's over
Erotic and haunting at the same time. This one will be sticking with me for a while.
You've beautifully woven the language into something that is simultaneously real and ethereal. Amazing work.
Gorgeous images: 'melting...one puddle' and 'winking under the flourescents' give it a gritty, but senuous feel. Very erotic, very HOT. Nice!