All Comments on 'iota of now'

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RybkaRybkaover 20 years ago
Tiddles & Jots

Very good! >?(((><

(BTW, only one "l" in "signalling".)

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
:-)

Lovely use of dry words to produce a succulent poem. A five, fer sure.

IcingsugarIcingsugarover 20 years ago
contrast

After reading denis hale's poem listed above, this was such a contrast that I had to take a breather before being able to read it. Small, humble and delicate. A significant blink of an eye put into words.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Exciting brevity and concision

Your words cut, slice, move through space like a prima ballerina's leg of steel in an allegro that stops time. Bravo.

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