All Comments on 'Malaise'

So many mundane details missed in getting ready for another day's daily grind, the worst part being the scraping of ice off the car's windows.

Great read, nice rhythm, crisp images, pulling back the curtain for a glimpse of a day in the life...brrr...thanks.

This poem was mentioned in Saturday's New Poems Reviews.

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i really needed that

Definitely on auto pilot here!

Two things I like about you, your sense of rhythm, and everything I reread your poetry, the meaning seems to shift, I was going to say I don't like this (blah, blah) but it seems like it was there for a reason, I haven't quite got a fix on it, and that is a very good thing. IMHO