All Comments on 'naked nerve'

Not that you can eat a nerve, but anything that produces a poem this wonderful is a welcome muse. :)

I swear your first language is English, your command of phrasing here is so smooth. There's a lot of nicely restrained obsession, and then it explodes at the end. You don't know how good you are.

I loved the cadence of this piece and how easily the strength and power of your voice shines through.

Lots of raw energy tapping that exposed nerve in this write, Liar. Great job!

raw!! a 5 minute convo with you can go miles and miles i'm certain.

you put so much into this..

enjoyable read liar!

now about that cracker jack poetry of mine! ~grinz~

go peek at the thread i started..tell me if i should even bother submitting. no one has commented, it's making me think i should have left it filed away.

anyhow, i'd appreciate some feedback from you! ty, xo, fawnie

Especially that you don't know how good you are.