All Comments on 'Nativity'

Birth or origin of — what? An intriguing piece you've penned here. Try reading this during a violent storm — that'll get your mind working!

This poem was mentioned in Friday's New Poems Reviews.

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Incredible imagery. About the need for redemption. Your poems are getting better every time you write. Leighlilly

Argh.

I humbly confess to not being able to grasp the identity of the speaking voice (on any level) or the theme (beyond nativity).<P>

The images though are powerful and original.<P>

I tried storm but it did not work for me with the ending or with tne big cosmic context at the begining. I'd love to be enlightened!