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LiarLiarabout 20 years agoAuthor
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"...blessing out..." = "...blessing our..."

found

fixed

resumbitted

grr

sandspikesandspikeabout 20 years ago
Love the sea

There is something romantic about saiing even on a

wooden boat. Good job

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Thank you for the correction...

that line sounded a bit odd, in an excellent poem. I was reminded of Ariel's song... "Full fathom five..." An interesting look at a cold, wet time...

jim : )

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 20 years ago
Wow-

This has such a wonderful wet and loving feel. I love the symphony of creaking boards. Bravo.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Oh! I know the feeling.

Sailing, or just wallowing on calm seas, with a wooden boat talking to you. Their character is so much stronger than those fiberglass fillies.

This poem says it all and more.

Anonymous
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