by RedHairedandFriendly
I like this one !!
Felt as if I were there, peepin !!
Great imagery, sexy ... sensual flow too.
You did great with this one.
Just a lil steam and sweet love.
More Please ~
Great visualization and while it flows well
seems a bit too list-like (just a small point);
I sense great talent here.
of emotion, swims through my ocean... how you made me want to dip my toes in sand.... -sgp-