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All Comments on 'One Day...And the Next'

by Oldbear63

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Well said

We lose track of what's important sometimes don't we? Beautifully written poem with a message I couldn't agree more on x

todski28todski28over 9 years ago
As always

Old bear your contrast is perfect and highlights the real important things in life. 5 ed your writing had developed from strength to strength. Been really good to watch!

TrixareforkidsTrixareforkidsover 9 years ago
Shifting priorities

Nicely represented.

JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago

Time to breathe and smell the roses. Wonderful!

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