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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Aye Captain, I think he's got it!

Even Mr. Scott would be proud of this one. Excellent piece from beginning to end!

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Great work

A fantastic piece,

a joy to read.

Loved it,

Thanks.

~ J

ReltneReltnealmost 19 years ago
Parminedic?

I greatly enjoyed the poem, but the title loses me. I can't even Google "Parminedic". The closest I can come is the Greek philosopher Parmenides. If you didn't transpose, will you enlighten?

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
dreamers

use technology to unlock the secrets or paths needed for a better world than create discourse in confrontation of finger pointing or blame for what is not in a land that isn't to fix what is? well I think I understand and like the concept or either you jotted down a brain fart I mean brain storm, thanks for sharing liar.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
mentioned

Your poem was mentioned in the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the journey in words~

~hellbaby~~hellbaby~almost 19 years ago
Manic Pride

I have to love a poem that turns a redhead into a blonde.

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