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I like the way this one speeds along. A reader can easily get caught up in your energy. I want to borrow: those bloody beautiful luscious little lies. I'm sure I have someone I need to say that to. :)

. . . for Valentine's Day!

A not so gentle plea, but the eroticism is,

and nicely done as well.

Just enough rhyme and alliteration to bring the reader up to the speed of the rant/write.

Then it surges on under its own momentum.

I loved this one...

Hindsight is always perfect, they say, private or not. I loved the feel of this snappy piece.