All Comments on 'ready to snap 1'

Simply beautiful

I do wish that your pieces had been posted side by side today so that the impact of the juxtaposed realities could be compared. Hopefully your faithful readers, myself included, will sort it all out.

As usual, great work, friend. Part one is so subtle and lulling that part 2 knocks you flat.

As always Liar, you paint a beautiful picture with your words. You have made that person you had in mind when writing this poem, immortalized in black and white.

Honey

I like the way you snap

I wish I could write so well.

Great job, Liar. ;-)