All Comments on 'Rite'

...and I'm left wanting more of the same. You sure do have a way with words, Mister L.

Tess

Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poem Review: http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=14145021#post14145021

(already voted the number on the thermometer does not count)

as

The last two lines are great ones for the image. Nice work.

a Temple,<grin> I enjoyed your rite ...liar

On knee bended

in sweet supplication

to a temple

of earthy delight ~

Is there any other...

In light of better words,

speechless.. thats where

you left me.

-sGp-

Cever images, but I found the "assault" and "ritual" metaphors at odds.

Good work, Liar.

Fly

I liked that you compare a body to a temple. The name "Rite" is very appropriate.