All Comments on 'She Came'

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matriarchmatriarchover 19 years ago
Your writing

just gets better and better. This is a beautiful rendition of that first love of youth, the one that lingers in your heart, long after it has left your life. Well done SIMA.

Du LacDu Lacover 19 years ago
discarding innocence..

Although I feel the words could be stronger I loved this image..

quote:

you came

on the floor

in the art gallery

tackling love

and me

pinpointing innocence

and discarding it

next to Cassatt

the image of a Cassatt.. impressionism.. the blues, pinks and sharp jabs of heavy paint, very physical use of art.. usually displaying when you step back a mother and child.. innocence displayed on the wall, blurred when close up... and the physicalness of the "tackle" of love and orgasm flinging innocence to the wind..

great image thank you for the journey~

Du Lac

impressiveimpressiveover 19 years ago
SIMA!

This is just lovely! Very nice work. ~Imp

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
"...drinking me like syrup..."

Perfect analogy! that line hooked me and made me smile huge. Great job, babe!

sacksackover 19 years ago
breezy.....

marvelouslly frank and realistic. I enjoyed this!

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