All Comments on 'She's Gone'

has never been enlivened...discriptions in few words and left a big impressive feeling...of longing...perfect...blue

Haunting image of longing emptiness...

I wasn't really sure where you were going with this but this line...

"She will return..."

brings it all home. Goes to show you sometimes have to look at the whole to see the true beauty.

So few words, such a big punch.

I love it Sack.

You painted a beauty of a picture here,

heartfelt and ... hopfull for you~!!

this one sent a chill down my spine, the hopeless hopefulness of the last line added impact to the already strong words above. Well done...

jim : )

chill is the word I wanted to use... well done sack

anna

and nothing short of

VOID and EMPTY..

very well done..

-sGp-

My kind of ending. You did a great job building the reader. I love your word choice. I had no idea where this was going to go. That's great in poetry. Thanks for sharing. Most definitely, excellent work!

much into poetry, that's my sister's thing, but I liked this one.

of emotion exploding in this one......love this image:

Peeling paint

rusty nails

broken hearts

solid piece......don

more of an opinion, okay, I just think it would be much stronger without the last line. Thats all :) good work

It's amazing how a few words can bring a little melancholy to the heart!

Written with soul!

In spite of the beautiful imagery there still exists an air of sadness about this lovely rendering. Beautiful.