All Comments on 'So turned a tide'

such a tight write, bittersweet and beautiful! excellent work Liar, loved it :)

with normal jean, drop the ohhhhh for me please.

end two lines are fantastic

two minor issues:

"immaculate but bruised." shells - bruised

"the hammers struck a chord." - hammers? where did they come from? the more one reads it the more these two lines detract and make it seem forced.

Otherwise, considering how diffucult it is to do "tide" "shore" "sunrise" etc. in a poem, some of this is masterfull, my congrats, wish I could have wrote soem of these lines.

it rubs the bulb, so to speak - 100

smoothly crafted with an aim at the reader's ears. the flow is so graceful it sings.