All Comments on 'To Travel In Small Steps'

by Liar

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minsueminsuealmost 20 years ago
You may not see poetry,

but the rest of us sure as hell do. =0)

flyguy69flyguy69almost 20 years ago
Left a mark

on her and on your readers. Beautiful poem, Liar.

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
For reasons

of my own

I love this

brought back some wonderful memories for me

Thank you

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
lovely

especially the pace of this poem and the description of her hair... you are really good Liar and your talent shines through nuclear in this poem, one of your best I think :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
I love this

A snapshot - a memory tinted slightly with regret. Lovely images. A gentle read.

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